and i edit your edit of edit to my edit with full manip WTF! xdd but too lanzy to make a boom if some1 want just to it xd i sucks at manipss.

CnC please
http://forum.toribash.com/attachment...3&d=1332723565

Uuuh I used that opener once for my replay, but it was fine
Elbow dm was ok
Dunno, right glute dm looks weird because you dm it with your... abs
You stopped after that D:
Another elbow dm was ok
Pose was ok
6/10
Also, new replay

what Replay did you CnC it?
the disarm or the link one

Disarm one
Split was ok, decap was ok. But you're stiff D: being stiff is unhealthy. Try to relax some joints. Pose wasn't good, hold some joints will help you to keep your balance.
Also, master should add replays from pros to rookies :o.

Being stiff really is unhealthy. Just ask uke.

the pose still onprogress

Since I was bored and lazy to make an opener i used Lolerz and this what happened

.-.

Looks cool, but the split is better than the decap.
Also needs better pose.
7/10

Loved the opener and booms The Double Skeet was Sexy. 9/10