Long apps aren't an issue, but this one was filled with run-on sentences. The least you could do is use your punctuation properly unless you're rather young or new to the English language somewhat which I'm guessing you may be one of those. As for your history of "raging", it won't do you well here since we tend to be a very respectful clan full of members whom do show that.
Off to your forum activity, I highly doubt that you're even close to being active on the forums with your current amount of posts, and since we're a forum based clan as well that's also going to be an issue. Now the last thing I would like to bring up is your belt, which makes me unsure of your current experience and how well you actually do ingame, but including all of the other factors I've discussed I'm going to have to go with a no.
Off to your forum activity, I highly doubt that you're even close to being active on the forums with your current amount of posts, and since we're a forum based clan as well that's also going to be an issue. Now the last thing I would like to bring up is your belt, which makes me unsure of your current experience and how well you actually do ingame, but including all of the other factors I've discussed I'm going to have to go with a no.
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"do it again and i'll insert my giant watermelon dick into your cornhole" ~ Smaguris
Originally Posted by lugq7
hello ne members my name is wayne my ign is lugq7 im a black belt and i am really active ingame and forums . so i will start with my life and toribash experience i was born on 2000 7th june and i started playing toribash around 2014 actually this was suggested by a friend of mine but he doesnt play toribash anymore i believe.so i played this game around 2014 and i really enjoyed it not at the first tho it was frustrating and yes i did rage but as i go through the game i learnt from pros i watched how they played and one of the guys i trained wit is torigod he thaught me that grabs isnt always the option you have to let go and grab at the right time.my real life hmmm at school i am an athlete a footballer actually but not really smart i am really not smart.ok time for my bad history i have raged to people and i actually dropped my reputation.ok thats enough so my skype is lugq7thekilla and my favourite mods are ABD wushu mushu aikido lolnade jousting and parkour eventho im not that good at it so guys i really appreciate that you have been reading this still thank you for everything bye bye
thanks for reading this i really hope i get in plz i really want to
from your nightmare lugq7
No capitalization, no formality/organization in this app. Very unorganized. If I'm able to vote on applications, my vote is no. An application should be formal
Originally Posted by lugq7
hello ne members my name is wayne my ign is lugq7 im a black belt and i am really active ingame and forums . so i will start with my life and toribash experience i was born on 2000 7th june and i started playing toribash around 2014 actually this was suggested by a friend of mine but he doesnt play toribash anymore i believe.so i played this game around 2014 and i really enjoyed it not at the first tho it was frustrating and yes i did rage but as i go through the game i learnt from pros i watched how they played and one of the guys i trained wit is torigod he thaught me that grabs isnt always the option you have to let go and grab at the right time.my real life hmmm at school i am an athlete a footballer actually but not really smart i am really not smart.ok time for my bad history i have raged to people and i actually dropped my reputation.ok thats enough so my skype is lugq7thekilla and my favourite mods are ABD wushu mushu aikido lolnade jousting and parkour eventho im not that good at it so guys i really appreciate that you have been reading this still thank you for everything bye bye
thanks for reading this i really hope i get in plz i really want to
from your nightmare lugq7
hello luqq7/WAYNE, now the problem with your application is its not 100% true, you claim that you are very forum active but you only have 4 posts since you have been in toribash. you reduced your chances with me from the start with that. also ne isn't for new players to the game to be straight up with you. ne is for skilled more experienced players to this game.
Also you should be more proper and not as laid back about your thought process and spelling of words when writing an application for anything. also, you said that torigod "thaught" you, now im not completely sure what thaughting is, but i know that torigod doesn't "thaught" anyone to my knowledge.
About your real life HMMMMM you say that you are a "footballer" now i know what a football player is but im not sure what a footballer does, you have my attention there. also you say that you are a "footballer" but not really at the same time. now this confuses me because one does not simply be a "footballer" and not a "footballer" at the same time. Now for the next subject im not sure why you would include it (or that you would have to) but you said you were "really not that smart"...just dont include stuff like that in an application man.
you say that your favorite mods are "ABD wushu mushu aikido lolnade jousting and parkour" you should really stop playing about 2/3's of those mods and focus on the most crucial thing when you join a clan, your ABD skill. now i appreciate that you read all this reply and sadly i have to break it to you but NO, bye bye
i really hope you get more experience before re-applying to the clan feel free to do so whenever you feel like your ready
From your nightmare crusher600
Last edited by Gravity; Mar 13, 2015 at 11:00 PM.
