It's crappy, I know. It's my first one, though, so give me some hard CnC.

not bad, quiet interesting...the reflection is good, but it's so simple.

I like to think of it as a bird landing on water.

it's really nice
did you do it from scratch?
and i like the little ripple on the reflection point

I actually like this, I would like to see this made into a toribash head (without reflection) but nice job...maybe add a little more detail

hmm looks like a bird dropping in the water

Like I mentioned, a bird on water. Thank you for all your compliments. Next time, I'll add more detail.

cool, its a bird?

Desired to be a bird, but drawn as art.

no, cut and edited brushes.

The brush editing is pretty basic, mainly just erasing half and placement and not much of your own work. You only drew the body of the wings right?
no flow from brush to brush, individual brushes are still too obvious.
still a little too abstract, wouldnt have guessed its a bird unless you had told us. abstract is all cool and stuff, could be done a little better tho.

i like the face of the bird though, even if the brushes are still obvious, it works well. just need to centre that brush properly.

youve got the basic idea down, using preset brushes to create custom forms and your own ideas.

keep practising.