Made in less than 5 minutes:

i was tooo lazy to remove my hand trail

(write "/opt trails 0" while u are ingame)

C/p some glowing effect and some trasparency effect on the blood... I dont like it, I would like so see more serious stuff from you in this thread.. and If you are too lazy for remove a trail after 5 minute of work OMG, maybe then you should not do art or do it when u have time and motivation for it.

This back round does not fit at all and so does the text. And please do edit it. The tori poses are not good at all but could easily be better if you put more time and effort in. 4/10

ok i will try to improve it, blend the tori with background.