I am hoping to get some feedback from experienced sparrers Its my very first attempt on spar replays. Hope you like it. Also it was with random guy, so not much conversation was done during the spar :c Tips are welcome!

For a first spar that's not too shabby. Needs some work of course, but probably better than anything I could pull off. Nice job on it. Just need to loosen up a bit more and relax some more.