Opener and transition were great, loved it.
Boom kick was very nice.
The grab was well placed, and that next kick was just awesome, you could probably turn that into a 7 piece boom if you really wanted to.
Transition was so smooth!
Skeet bounce thing was very cool, I should try and attempt one of those in one of my replays some time.
the ending pose was fine, but I'd prefer you relax your right knee and slightly lower your left arm to give it that sex appeal. ;o
I'll post an example to show you what I'm talking about.