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thank you for your intricate and very thought out comment and advice foobi

no seriously dont post at all if you're not gonna give at least some cnc
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Originally Posted by adam2332 View Post
no seriously dont post at all if you're not gonna give at least some cnc

I GOT CHU

Alright, so:
Opener was really off-balance. This is mostly because you're too close, not a whole lot of room to move around and build speed. I'd recommend starting farther away.
I also really dislike how the first hit was with your shin. There are exceptions but as a general rule try to keep most of your hits clean by aiming with your feet, unless you're gonna get some massive ghost.
I loved the chestboom, it ghosted really nicely and looked powerful. Gj
The decap was ok, not much can be improved on it I guess.
The fourth hit would have been much better if it wasn't a shin hit like the other one. Just focus on making your hits cleaner (aiming better) and you'll improve a lot more.
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thank you private part <3

two replays this time

i was gonna scrap the quickie one but i figured eh why not
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just realized how shitty my pose was
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Last edited by adam2332; Nov 6, 2014 at 12:13 AM.
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I like everything but the ghosting in the opener and the stuff you did after the boom.
You're really improving, but work on movement after the big stuff. See if you can end it on a good note.
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