So this is a self-spar that I did. It is my first ever spar, and I actually did it for a GM event. This is the link: http://forum.toribash.com/showthread...74#post5701374
Anyway, I know it is pretty bad, but I want constructive criticism.
Anyway, I know it is pretty bad, but I want constructive criticism.
First of all, try to attack when you're on your feet and balanced, otherwise it looks unrealistic. Also, you seemed a bit twitchy at times, and this can be solved by just making up your mind on what you're doing. The flip was pretty good, however it still would have been better if you left the ground off of two feet. Remember to keep your head held at all times, because it was just flopping about the whole spar. Another tip I would have is to never have both knees fully extended at once. It looks very odd in the replay, and it's very hard to stay balanced like this.
Here's 2 succeed decap with the move (opener) that hepimen taught me, with some improvisation though.. 
if I remember right, I've had decapped 4 heads with that move.. but I forgot to save the replay..
if I remember right, I've had decapped 4 heads with that move.. but I forgot to save the replay..
I'm NOT Noob
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