ur a very good editor and u make very good edits
only thing i'll say about this is that the velo doesn't feel impactful enough imo. also possibly could have gone from great to amazing if this was in like 12/15 fps maybe instead of 24 (as much as i don't like low fps edits it would have fit i believe!). i think if u did either one of those things it would look amazing, but those are just random ideas i had and it still looks good otherwise
other than that very nice shit per usual