gonna cnc $Fred_lingondricka
this is only opinion based , keep that in mind
so lets start with some issues with random/odd joint movements ,
frame 4922 :
your right knee contracts for 3-4 frames , which indicates a lack of speed during this twist
frame 4914
your right arm contracts to fast
frame 4840
dislike the fact that you extend your elbow like that without significant impact on the spin , this could work in other replay types , but not here
frame ~4800-4701
worst part of the opener ,just looks like a re-positioning of your right arm , stick to the ground with that , also you are to fast during those few frames , and to slow afterwards
frame ~4700-4410
your general movement is fast and looks good during the manipulation
but , and thats just me , it looks messy , keep a bit more distance between you and uke and everything would look much cleaner
but i love the flow afterall
the way you pushed him high enough for the boom hit (~frame 4400)
is my favorite part, looks like a sexy dance, your arm sync´s perfectly to ukes rotation , just amazing
the boom is clean and no random movements for more dismemberments in sight
the little jump befor the end pose is neat aswell
not stock worthy tho , but a great example for newcomers