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[VID] Toribash - Oblivion
Hello everyone. I made this.
Please tell me how much you hated it/loved it, and drop by my channel for some…fuck.

Replays by Oblivion
Editing Program: Final Cut Pro X
Recording Program: Snapz Pro X
Song: Dimensions By Luke & Skywalker x Louis The Child
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theres a problem when you start to recognise the replays from other vids.
the standard fade to black transition is getting boring.
felt slow, sync was there, but felt boring.

the vid was pretty enough, colours were good and the free cam was smooth(albeit boring)
but youve made enough vids now, that pretty doesnt cut it, need to start getting "well done" and "pretty" together now.
more interesting camera angles, sync that people notice and go "ooooh" and custom transitions
generally more interesting things.

pretty similar standard as your other previous vids, but im seeing very little progression.
Team Girl Scouts still your best vid, by far
Last edited by BenDover; Jun 6, 2013 at 05:41 PM.
-=Art is never finished, only abandoned=-
Originally Posted by BenDover View Post
theres a problem when you start to recognise the replays from other vids.
the standard fade to black transition is getting boring.
felt slow, sync was there, but felt boring.

the vid was pretty enough, colours were good and the free cam was smooth(albeit boring)
but youve made enough vids now, that pretty doesnt cut it, need to start getting "well done" and "pretty" together now.
more interesting camera angles, sync that people notice and go "ooooh" and custom transitions
generally more interesting things.

Team Girl Scouts still your best vid, by far


yeah, im trying to work on more creative angles and transitions, although i dont really like using effects in my videos so it would be a bit harder to make people go "ooooooh"
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Originally Posted by BenDover View Post
theres a problem when you start to recognise the replays from other vids.

Yeah, I'll take all the blame from that one.
Replay-making time has been very few for a long time now :(
I had a good run though, and intend to give it a proper ending when I can.


As for the video, many thanks for it!
I really really really liked the whole graphic look of it.
A bit more of flare with the sync could have been nice but I don't want to repeat what BenD said so thumbs up since I liked it.
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Originally Posted by Osiris View Post
yeah, im trying to work on more creative angles and transitions, although i dont really like using effects in my videos so it would be a bit harder to make people go "ooooooh"

You don't need to use effects. One camera angle can make a whole video amazing.
Originally Posted by Oblivion View Post
Yeah, I'll take all the blame from that one.
Replay-making time has been very few for a long time now
I had a good run though, and intend to give it a proper ending when I can.


As for the video, many thanks for it!
I really really really liked the whole graphic look of it.
A bit more of flare with the sync could have been nice but I don't want to repeat what BenD said so thumbs up since I liked it.

thanks, im glad you liked it
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