Andrew Chuson1: It was okai. You could've tried to set up for the first clash a bit more. You had a good set up at about 740 frames.
if you had waited a sec for that momentum to slow, then you could have pushed of forwards. The sort of twitchiness afterwards didn't look that great.
I liked the kick afterward though. If you could refine that a bit more, it could look great! you do need to work on your launches a bit though. and your poses.
6/10
lagg adame2: I guess first: clashes will be clashes. I like the launch you did at about 710
frames, that was quite nice. Afterward, though, that sorta save that you did didn't look
that great. try to avoid the ghosting through limbs. that second launch after that could
have gone better. After that though, the replay was bad.
5/10
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Edit: perhaps we can spar in the future?
Last edited by Nearly; Jun 9, 2012 at 11:55 AM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump