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#[M] 9-11 All over again.rpl

800-650 looks too lazy and really slow. anyway nice manipulation and decap.
work on your standing in the end.
btw cut the matchframes for more beauty c:
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Thanks,rny! I'll keep those in mind,and I shall try to do better posing next time,So is with shortening the matchframes. C:
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I think I just whipped something cool out!
CnCs are veeeeeeeeeery appreciated!
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#[S] Gears.rpl (234.9 KB, 14 views)
Last edited by DiuwayBuns; Aug 7, 2015 at 04:51 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
I finally finished this replay I had lying around for more than 2 months,found the time to do so.
CnC it for me people! C:
When apple tarts aren't the same as pineapple tarts:
nice manip i like the movements but the contracting wrists at a couple of points throughout look ugly
also, your momentum seems to stop erratically sometimes
i especially love the last spin before the kicks
the 1st kick looked weird, but its fine, imo you should've made it dm
2nd kick was ok
3rd kick was eh, but acceptable
ok pose

good jobs
Originally Posted by sSLight View Post
When apple tarts aren't the same as pineapple tarts:
nice manip i like the movements but the contracting wrists at a couple of points throughout look ugly
also, your momentum seems to stop erratically sometimes
i especially love the last spin before the kicks
the 1st kick looked weird, but its fine, imo you should've made it dm
2nd kick was ok
3rd kick was eh, but acceptable
ok pose

good jobs

Eih Lumayo,Thanks mayne.
Done my very first collab,and with Sqynt here.
The posting got delayed because we still tried to dm with the kick skeet,unfortunately it did not suffice,though on the near future we might come back and edit it.(P.S our parts are jumbled)
CnCs would be very kind of you!
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I think it was the best replay EVER! Good job guys!
-Totally not doing CnC on my own collab.. ;-;
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opener was very ugly because of that initial ghosting, the entire replay was extremely twitchy, when i say extremely i mean like unhealthily twitchy

i was expecting a manip after the lift

the last kick was the only thing i enjoyed

there was no way in hell enough velocity for your skeet to dm