ToriCombat League
okayyy hi. so ima do both replays at the same time because i see the same issues in both. (last 2 btw)

so openers for both were fine and cool nice spins and flips and lifts on both. really enjoyed the lifts. i noticed tho after you came into contact with uke ur movement deteriorated pretty heavily. you were just holding ur arms and didnt have as much flow as you could have and that really takes away from the aesthetic of the replay. the manips themselves were pretty cool, but when you got the the dms it felt really half assed. you were also twitching around like crazy trynna get the dms and again you were super stiff.


imo id work on flowing through your movements and finding interesting dm patterns.


cool replays tho my guy pls do more
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