you say that and yet, you've literally made something better with this one.
i think the punch in the opener would've been better if you didn't hit uke, in my mind you were going for like a cute pause with it, like some sort of taunt, but because you hit uke's body, it kinda looks weird, but jesus christ everything after that just flowed so smoothly holy fuck, and what tabby said really, the whole hand and feet movement to the last boom was extraordinary, keep doing whatever you fucking did after the opener bro
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and the transition to the pose could've been better