opener starts out cool, 500-450 is offensive

you grab uke a lot without it really doing anything, you get some spins for yourself but that's it

despite the massive boom you get, the first kick feels lackluster to me because of the way you went into it; from fast spins to a slow hop

the second kick is definitely a step-up, but unfortunately doesn't dismember the chest/joint for that extra feeling of power behind the kick

you 100% know how to move your tori in a way that looks cool, but this replay lacks the x factor for me

this is sick and i really like it, but too many grabs my g, too many.

i missed u ily.

hey

this was cool

please grab less
cnc:

i didnt like the opener but the flow change at 480 was cute it reminded me of my self because i am cute
spins after that are cool but stop fucking grabing hng gnvnvkf
first kick is a banger but then it seems like u kinda didnt know what to do
when u first got the grab on uke u can see the individual hand movements and ur arm stops then contnues and its kind of ugly
next kick was cool but please make it symmetrical (this isnt actual cnc i just like it this way lol)
flailing in air was a bit gay - wouldve rathered u just cushion the last kick and try land on your legs

epic replabjjn: just grab less and dont have openers that are so reliant on bouncing around so much (literally hit the ground like 2 or 3 times just to rotate onjce)

Everything that everyone else criticised I liked, including the jumping around and all the grabs

what anime is this?

fuck

really didnt like anything from frames 600 to 430, kinda ugly ngl. glad you didnt resort to a cork out of the tdr. instead of doing a cartwheel i kinda wish you did some kind of axe into the wrap full. wish you put some variation on that dub cork considering this is bounceontramp. still, everything looked smooth. good job!

that this is pretty pretty and i like it alot and it's so smooth smoother than baby oil oiling a baby

12/10

I'd like to see anyone putting variations of Dubs even close to what Mack does. Sure implying or giving the idea of it is a nice thing considering it's Cnc, but you're essentially degrading Mack's tricking in the way you talk about them. It's easier than Xspar yes. But it's also fucking more realistic, can you stuck in 2012 mindset fuckwadds fucking get it through your thick skulls. (Not mainly directed to you Epoch, but kinda at the same time)