So,the first replay is really nice nothing to say about it,the second one has some problems for example the opener(it's for the TWC by concon) u won't use challnege openers, at frames 377-348 u just keep your shoulders hold and at frame 347 u relaxed ur shoulder and than immediately raised it,looks a bit ugly. the first and the second kicks were awesome nothing bad to say,the third kick is really nice but try to dm the "penis" and make red the other glute,very nice transition into the pose just some wrong movements in the last 50 frames.
Overall pretty nice just try to make boom hits,do simmetric dms and if u can and be move fluid in the movements 8.8/10 (nice style).
Last edited by NICOLAS135; Jun 13, 2015 at 01:48 PM.