Hello, my name is Picasa. I'm beginning to (I believe) become a sparrer, but I really need your voices to help me improve.

Pressure Points
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A decent/bad replay.

It started out as a multiplayer replay, but the player had to go. Also, was meant to look unrealistic.

Forgot his name.
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Criq vs Zikyulo
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He had to go too so I had to edit it.

Criq - pressure points= too much contact, messy.
criq - my friend has returned= the finisher has too much twitching when you rotated your chest too many times also imo you over did the jumping, also some jumps/spins and stuff looked very awkard, but you had nice flow at least




Lol so I understand, you are not good self spar, I am not good at it either, well anyway

You need to manage more the distance between you and the opponent. Not being too far or too close. It is a really important point in what i seen in your replays. When you do a jump, try to land on your feet. I know jumping everywhere is a kind of entertaining but most of jumps that you done in these replays are useless (because the bad direction/distance). Be more fluid with your moves, when you start a move, try to relax/hold more your joints.

Keep up your good job ;)

I was lacking in this spar.

I need to stop that.

Ending wasn't the best, but not the worst.