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>>RAJEN TIME<<




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Last edited by Toad; Apr 24, 2023 at 05:03 PM.
Noicee
Looks like my mom (Beautyfull) ;)
i love the punch and the pose at the end
Everything flows very well
as always
10/10
the first 80 frames were 100% generic bs launch opener
At about 320-300 your arms were very twitchy and somewhat your knees
265 you landed in a very awkward position after tapping uke with your foot *not sure if that was intentional
~240 your knee ghosts into your shoulder and you overall raise your leg way too high
190-180 just overall looks awkward
I'm personally not a fan of the whole quick grab but meh that's a personal thing
The spin as a whole was decent, nothing special
The ending decap punch was such awkward positioning, you were wayy too bent over.
Fucking loved the ending though.
6/10. I know you can do better.
Knock down da walls wiv big rocks and kill all the men wiv arras. - Lamby
lol that was very funny and actually well done, rarely does a funny idea get paired with good execution when it comes to replays. reminds me of replays by dafe that nuthug showed me one time where he tried to use uke as a pole to pole vault. seemingly the more experience replaymakers have the focus becomes execution, but it would be so cool to see more idea driven replays
oh yeah
Originally Posted by Nulu View Post
the first 80 frames were 100% generic bs launch opener
At about 320-300 your arms were very twitchy and somewhat your knees
265 you landed in a very awkward position after tapping uke with your foot *not sure if that was intentional
~240 your knee ghosts into your shoulder and you overall raise your leg way too high
190-180 just overall looks awkward
I'm personally not a fan of the whole quick grab but meh that's a personal thing
The spin as a whole was decent, nothing special
The ending decap punch was such awkward positioning, you were wayy too bent over.
Fucking loved the ending though.
6/10. I know you can do better.

So basically, Everything sucks but the pose transition = 6/10?
I do dissagree with many of the things you mentioned. Other I just see as major nitpicking. Thank you for sharing your opinion though.

Thanks everyone else, I apreciate it.


Here's another decap, a bit more advanced though. Also forced meme ending.
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Mack - [M] - Potatis.rpl (260.1 KB, 49 views)
|Opener by Xioi|#KillTheScootCork|
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"Cool delfin med solglajjor" -Larfen
Originally Posted by Mack View Post
So basically, Everything sucks but the pose transition = 6/10?
I do dissagree with many of the things you mentioned. Other I just see as major nitpicking. Thank you for sharing your opinion though.

Sorry I thought you'd enjoy a thorough nitpicking being as that's what I use to help work on what I need to fix (NOT TRYING TO BE SARCASTIC)
I'll try to point out all the good in this one c:

The way you kept your momentum going looked really nice along with the rotational speed you got there.
I thoroughly enjoyed how you used that little tap on his hand to spin him just enough to get a perfect kick onto uke.
The decap had good power and overall looked pretty nice.
The grab was a nice help to transition into the pose, not something I expected. It looked really nice, keep it up.
Knock down da walls wiv big rocks and kill all the men wiv arras. - Lamby
Thanks. While I do enjoy critique it of course doesn't mean I enjoy people nitpicking on replays and stating it in a way as if it was a major flaw. An even mix of critique and mentioning good things is my understanding of good cnc seeing as it both makes you want to do better and gives you the motivation to do so.

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Here's a parkour I'm working on. While I'm madly proud over it I still can't find a way to continue it. Tips would be helpful
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oasuss.rpl (1.08 MB, 24 views)
sparkour_oasis.tbm (27.6 KB, 12 views)
|Opener by Xioi|#KillTheScootCork|
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"Cool delfin med solglajjor" -Larfen
its lookin pretty fuckin cool so far but id say to get off the box, theres no shame in doing a couple of backflips/back handsprings to get to your destination c:
Thanks.

Here's some filler shit. Out of ideas rn.
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Mack - [M] - Hellfire.rpl (126.2 KB, 38 views)
|Opener by Xioi|#KillTheScootCork|
|Replays|
"Cool delfin med solglajjor" -Larfen