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[Text]Sensei Lee


resolution: 512x512
i started this project yesterday hope you enjoy it
but its still a WIP his clothe wil get edited

Sits way too hit on the head, looks silly.
rest is cool

give the bangs of the hair a bit more flair, theyr very straight, and boring.
-=Art is never finished, only abandoned=-
Gradeger i want a usefull critique......if you say the ears are weird say what is weird and i can fix it......
@ben thx for the tipp
edit:

that should be better
pony i wont change it must be straight ^^
Last edited by KOTBOLT; Jun 11, 2011 at 03:39 PM.

Imo the eyez need a very big change.
Cause he doesn't look like a sensei atm.
Looks more like a mystery gay man with an orgasm looking at you with love from the deepest spot of his heart.
So anyways, put the eyes lower and make them more like smart, or perhaps rename the thing to Mystery Zombie Gay Maniacco from Mexico.(MZGMM, P.S. No racism!!!)
Needs a bit work with the eyebrows. He looks very unconfident cause of them.
Needs more details on the lips aswell...
Cause you called that a sensei, I put you 3/10.
Work on it more.
Sorry for my horrible gay humor. Ahoahohohohohaho... ahoh..hoho...
Last edited by Lexx; Jun 11, 2011 at 08:13 PM.
"Philosophy of mankind are pink dreams of a blue planet" ~Lexx
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Bring the eyes down to around the middle.



The first one is the head if the eyes were in the middle. The second is your version.
i wont change the eyes because its my head and i like it how it is
1. the eyes i dont change because i want to see the MM sign and his mantle
i just will change the look of the eyes
and nose will get fixed thx for your critics
@Lexx 3/10........ your critism shows your less respect to my art (in my opinion) ....i dont want to know that this heads looks to you like an ''Gay Maniacco from Mexico''.....
and there is no ''Sensei look'' they can look always diffrent.
the rest of the critics from you is ok thx
Last edited by KOTBOLT; Jun 11, 2011 at 09:39 PM.