Don't like the floor design. You could've cut that out entirely.
Otherwise, I really quite like it.
"Call yourself alive? I promise you you'll be deafened by dust falling on the furniture,
you'll feel your eyebrows turning to two gashes, and your shoulder blades will ache for want of wings."
I really couldn't think of anything to do with the floor, so instead of creating a metal texture by hand (which really wouldn't have been so hard), I simply made a tile floor. I agree with you though, it could've been cut out completely.
u r a excellent 3d artist
