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RedRebel24's Spar Thread
Hello guys! I am gonna start dumping my spars here. Here are the first couple. I will upload more later. I am looking for some feedback so I can get better. Go ahead and fire away.
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spar with Adam.rpl (289.6 KB, 15 views)
spar with beast.rpl (519.3 KB, 13 views)
Last edited by RedRebel24; Sep 29, 2013 at 04:50 PM.
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Here is another one with Best. We had to cut it short because we both ran out of time.
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second spar with best.rpl (470.4 KB, 3 views)
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CnC is Greatly appreciated. :3

The first one with Rusta we had to finish early so I finished it myself. It isn't as good as it could be.
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spar with Rusta-finished.rpl (515.4 KB, 6 views)
spar with rusta #2.rpl (691.7 KB, 3 views)
staff spar with victor.rpl (505.9 KB, 5 views)
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Rusta finished - your balance was a bit weird and the run was not very good, also try and add more realism, the pose wasnt very great either, so just work on all of that and you will improve, 2.7/10
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Rusta 2- It was alot better than rustafinished, balance wise, but still you need to work on realism, flow, and poses. Try and work and these elements of your spars and you will get better, 4/10
Last edited by PureShado; Oct 30, 2013 at 07:29 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
thanks for responding. I will definitely work on it.
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