Toribash
The opener was okay but it took to long for me.
I didn't like how you grabbed uke 2 times in order to make a really good kick.
The back kick was okay but not much action to it.
When you went on the ground I couldn't tell what you were dming.
Pose was okay.
Replay thread

Just made...

Thanks for the constructive criticism, always welcomed.

Also I tried to make a replay as clean as I could (in -44 because why not)
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<BISH> kick chan my modes are moving on their own~
<Shook> FLAGGOTS
I like it.
but you should try to get straight into the pose at frame 352.
Anyway. Try just to make <-25:-30> replays, will be more flow in them and stuff, and yet tho you managed to keep up the good flow in that one too.
I'll edit it because why not

Edit: I managed to have stable pose here...
But it looks twitchym work arround that and you may get great effect from it.
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!Manly edit.rpl (128.0 KB, 14 views)
Last edited by Kaszanas; Feb 17, 2013 at 04:47 PM.
<iRookie>This clan got a lot of epic members, such as missuse and Aj, Pulse and Kaszanas, and I want to be part of them.
But you ruined the cleanliness :o but I'll keep working on a pose and post it when I get one to work.
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I did it, got a good pose quicker so yeah.
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Last edited by ManlyPotato; Feb 17, 2013 at 05:28 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
<BISH> kick chan my modes are moving on their own~
<Shook> FLAGGOTS
okay nice one ;) even tho i don't like just straight pose things cause it looks weird, it's good one ;)
I wait for another replay of yours.
Also check my thread man.
I posted new collab with pusga.
<iRookie>This clan got a lot of epic members, such as missuse and Aj, Pulse and Kaszanas, and I want to be part of them.
Also if you haven't seen the colab I did with Kasz the imma post it here. View whore? WHO SAID THAT!?

In all honesty check out his replay thread, they're all great replays.
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#Potato-Kaszanas - Puree.rpl (347.4 KB, 23 views)
<BISH> kick chan my modes are moving on their own~
<Shook> FLAGGOTS
At about frame 1050, you were perfectly set up for a skeet shot to the head of uke, should've done that imo
then at about frame 600 you're arm was lowered for about 130 or so frames and it looked really unnatural.
nice job on the opener though, nice boom.
Your pal,
crith
Nother replay, because yeah. Split cap rules.
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#Potato - All abord the train.rpl (115.3 KB, 22 views)
<BISH> kick chan my modes are moving on their own~
<Shook> FLAGGOTS
It was a very simple splitcap, the way you twitched your leg right after landing the first kick was not so good. The decap was well done, but I didn't really like the setup, it was pretty basic.
Yup, kinda forgot about this. So here's a decap replay.
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#Potato - Guillotine.rpl (93.3 KB, 14 views)
<BISH> kick chan my modes are moving on their own~
<Shook> FLAGGOTS