[TPC] Story Creation Contest! (Page 3)

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Jak

Oct 16, 2012

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Oct 16, 2012

[TPC] Story Creation Contest!

Oh My God!!!!! What is this story we speak of... Well people, its a story creation contest. We want you guys, the people, to make us a freaking story!!! Yeah that's right, a story!!! There are prizes too!!! Oh god, bet you are all having an orgasmic attack right now. DON'T WORRY THOUGH! In this story, there is a medic... I think...

Okay on a serious note, ThePieClan wants you guys to make a story for us. It doesn't have to relate to us, but the more relative it is the better chances it has of placing. Also, just to hint at something, if you use the people in ThePieClan as characters, you may have even better chances at placing! So yeah... Pretty much it... MEDIC!!! WE NEED A MEDIC!!! TO MANY ORGASMIC ATTACKS!!! Be creative, be scary (since you know, our anniversary is in Halloween), and be AWESOME!!!

Rules:

Plagiarism is not tolerated, any story that is Plagiarized will be disqualified and not able to enter. Hence disqualification.
There are no limits to the stories, but try to make them scary since Halloween is coming up
No stealing other peoples ideas, if one has a superbearmonsterfrog I don't want to see that in another story. First story will get credited with the creativity and idea.
Use proper grammar.
You are allowed 1 entry, but you may swap it at any time before the deadline.
IT HAS TO BE MADE FOR THIS CONTEST! No Pre-written ones.

Judges:

Beta
PieGod
Azuremage
Cozzakilll

Prizes:

First: 20k
Second: 10k
Third: 4k

The deadline for your stories are on November 24th. You have some time, use it to your advantage.

Last edited by Jak; Oct 16, 2012 at 11:54 PM.

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Jak

Oct 20, 2012

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Oct 20, 2012

Originally Posted by flikrspeed

My entry
The little boy creeped silently through the hallway, shivering. It was dark, he could just barely see his hands outstretched in front of him. The floorboards creaked. The boy stopped.
He swore that the sound did not come from under his foot. He was scared, but was he paranoid? His foot was heavy but he kept on going. His shaky hand reached into his pocket and found his phone, he turned it on and pointed it ahead, daring to use it as a source of light.
He had only moved halfway down the hall at the time, but the hall was empty. He took a cautious step towards the sound. Left. There was a door, his hand automatically reached towards the doorknob.
The doorknob was cold and sent a tingle down his spine. He grabbed hold and turned it. He loosened himself for a second and pushed softly. The excruciatingly loud screech of hinges sounded. The boy was now terrified. He tip-toed slowly into the room.
The feeling struck. The slight tingle on the back of his head. He turned around. Nothing was there. Nothing was there now at least. The little boy whimpered. Someone was watching, something was watching.
His eyes darted around, his breathing now irregular, he could hear the muffled sound of his heart beating. Why was he here? How did he get in here?
A footstep. Two footsteps. The boy froze. Three. It was coming closer. Four. It was gone. The boy had just realised that he was holding his breath and exhaled. He pointed his phone around. He saw stairs.
While he was terrified, he found himself attracted to the stairs. Automatically moving towards the stairs. Scared of what was to come.
By the time he was aware of his actions he was at the top. He turned around.
No, he thought he turned around. He found himself walking into another room, a bedroom. The window was open, moonlight flooded the room. He looked around and flinched when he saw a painting of a woman staring directly at him.
It made him feel uncomfortable so he looked away.
Another footstep. The boy froze once again. He looked around.
A shadow was moving across the wall. A shadow of something that wasnt there. It was in the shape of a person.
The shadow stopped, as if just realizing that the boy was there. The boy stepped backwards towards the door.
An inhuman scream filled the little boys head and he froze in terror as the paintings lips curled into a smile.

... Not really used to writing horror.
Can I keep on adding to this just in case i come up with more?

Yes, and epic story

also nice story ninja HAHAHAHA made me laugh.

zenzen213

Oct 20, 2012

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Oct 20, 2012

Made this in notes

It all started a few months ago from this very day. My name is Betad Roshard, Beta for short. Right now I don't have much time. I need you to read my story and do what you are supposed to do.
First I have to tell you my story. My friends Johnny and Largo were horsing around with me in my basement those few months ago. I turned around as soon as I head the word "OUCH!" I went over to see what happened. I saw Largo on the floor, and something next to his foot.
I helped Largo up, and then I asked "What did you trip on?" Largo replied "I don't know, but it seemed it appeared out of nowhere." I leaned down and examined the mysterious object, it seemed to be some kind of handle. "I think it's a doorway" Johnny said.
I tugged on the door's handle but it did not budge. "Look!" Johnny said, "There's a keyhole" he added. We looked and looked for the key but we did not find it. All of a sudden, my hands started tingling, and my eyes felt weird.
"Ummm, Beta, your eyes are glowing and your hands are glowing as well." Largo said, "It seems as something is happening as your hands are glowing." he added. "I see something, something flashing, in the shape of a.... KEY!!" I said, surprised at everything that is happening.
"I see a house, WAIT A MINUTE!" I yelled. "THAT'S MY HOUSE" I added. "I see my house's...... BACK, THE KEY IS IN THE BACK!" I shouted excitedly. As soon as I figured it out, the flasing and the visons and the glowing just.....stopped. We all ran outside and went to the spot where I saw my house from.
"I don't see anything here." Largo said. "Maybe it's underground?" Johnny said, wondering. We all decided to start digging with the shovel I use for my garden work. It took us a while, but we finally uncovered the key, and we all then dashed to the basement and put the key in the lock.
It turned very slowly, and made a louse creaking noise like an old wooden door. When it finally opened, we all stared in amazment, as there was a blood red doorway right in front of us down a hall from where we were crouched down in my basement. We all stepped inside the doorway to the dark, gloomy hallway that leaded to the treacherous doorway that loomed ahead.
"What's inside there?" I asked, clueless. "There's only one way to find out, even though I know we all won't like it." Largo said. We all crept inside to the hallway that was pitch dark except for the doorway with such slight light I couldn't even move without bumping into Johnny or Largo. We finally reached the doorway and we heard horrible screams and moans coming from the inside.
I swallowed and a lump stuck in my throat. We all slowly opened the door to find a dark red room, and as soon as we went into the room, the door crumbled into pieces. "No way out now." Largo said. We all had to continue this, as we had no choice but what lied ahead.

Thought I'd post a W.I.P
My mind: Goes from bright story to dark, dark story.

I'm known for cliffhangers. \ o /

Last edited by zenzen213; Oct 20, 2012 at 09:03 AM.

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cozzakilll

Oct 20, 2012

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Oh, just found this page because before a couple of posts, it had been 2 days since anyone posted. I hope to see some awesome stories

. Some that have already been posted are pretty good. Keep up the good work.

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Trice

Oct 20, 2012

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Labyrinth Bizzare -WIP-

"everyone GO!!!"i instruct a every person around me. This is not a joke for an hour back then i was enjoying normal life, but it suddenly changed. This was started at i am in front of my school gate, i was sighed that i would think that this day will be as boring as always (but it not,it become terrified). Someone hit my back really hard,i though it was a kidnapper. But when i regain my consciousness, i was in large pitch black room,i can't see anything, but suddenly the room become bright, it make my eyes hurt, but when my eyes getting used to the light, i saw 5 people in a rooms consist 3 boys (including me) and 3 girls, "Azusa? why are you here?" i asked a girl with two ponytail and has feminine look, "Higuchi!? i don't know i was attacked from behind and i scared" she hug me crying, if the atmosphere not this intense i might be blushed, but she came here just like me, everyone is confused except 1 boy that not looking confused rather he was happy he approach us "My name is Ayanokoji Mirumo you can call me Koji,but i know that this is rude, but are you two couples?" he asked it with straight tone, we break the hug and blushed "no...we are classmate,my name is Higuchi Kaji,and she is Azusa Willow." i introduce us, "Nice to meet you, oh yeah any chances that you know what happened here?" I wished i can answer that question but suddenly there a broadcast in the room. "Good morning ladies and gentleman, you have been picked to join this fun games, i picked 5 guys that perfect with this course, all of you complete all human nature. Know each other for 10 minutes and after that the door will be open,and next 2 minutes after the door opened this room will be collapsed,until then Cheerio", what is he thinking about,he think that this is just a game? judging from his voice he is around 16-17 years old, everyone seems fussing, but suddenly "EVERYONE SHUT UP!!!!" Azusa shout, i never knew that she can shout like that, it seems that everyone clam down too, "I think she is right we need to introduce ourself, like the announcement said that 5 peoples in here have different human nature, my name is Higuchi Kaji and if what announcer said it true i might be in calm and analysis kind of person" i introduce myself, "My turn, my name is Ayanokoji Mirumo, Ayanakoji is too long right? you can call me Koji, it seems that i am the humorous type" Koji introduce himself smiling,and suddenly his face change "but i can serious too". "Emm...my name is Azusa Millow, i think i am the announcer pick me because my persuade ablity" introduce Azusa. A strong looking guy stand and start introducing himself "My name is Agasa Shishou, i won International Karate tournament 5 times a row, i can got my sixth if this didn't happen,and it means that i am the strength type"

thing need to be done
finish the story and fix the grammar

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Jak

Oct 20, 2012

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Oct 20, 2012

Trice I am having a hard time reading it.

cozzakilll

Oct 20, 2012

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He said he'll fix the grammar. The problem is that if you don't, the amazing story will be incomplete and therefore not at the peak potential it could of been at.

"Always Extreme at heart."
I don't check the forums or go in-game anymore, I have quit.

Trice

Oct 20, 2012

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Oct 20, 2012

i know that's why
i am intend to finish it first and fix the grammar

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Jak

Oct 20, 2012

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Oct 20, 2012

Ah okay

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Oct 21, 2012

Fivah's Return

Ok I will have a go at this.

Prologue

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Sorry Fivah your name just sounds evil D:
I am only in 8th grade so it might not be the best.

zenzen213

Oct 21, 2012

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Oct 21, 2012

Originally Posted by ninja684

Ok I will have a go at this.

Prologue
A long time ago in a town named Morbon lived most wicked creature of all, Fivah. Fivah being a demon had to work in hell at some times. So Fivah could only return every 50 years on Halloween to wreak havoc in Morbon. On halloween 1950 an angel named beta stopped Fivah's terror. Only to realize that it would only make it worse the next time he showed up.

Chapter 1
The mayor, Piegod, was decorating the streets during October waiting for Halloween. The police chief, Gradeger, was helping along with his new recruits n8t and bostaff. When suddenly a preacher came out trying to warn people of Fivah and that they should leave town. Gradeger though he was trying to start havoc himself so he arrested him.

When asked his name he responded rot3ex a 76 year old man. Being the only one who survived the attack 50 years ago. Everyone thought the man was crazy, so they had him placed in a mental asylum.

Chapter 2
The night before Halloween all the roads have been decorated. All citizens had gone to bed so they can stay up the next night. At 12:00 a loud explosion hit dead center of town. It woke the whole town from there sleep. Piegod looked out his window and saw Fivah walking past his window.

Suddenly Rot3ex got a call at the asylum, it was Piegod. Rot3ex was rushed to Piegod's house to see what happened. Piegod was frantic to see if there was a way Fivah's terror could be stopped. There was only one way to stop it and Rot3ex would not explain.

Chapter 3
All rot3ex said was to have him brought to Fivah, so it was done. When they got there rot3ex said to have all the citizens brought to him. When they all got there he told them to form a human circle around Fivah. Fivah started to to get furious and threw balls of fire at rot3ex, they were running out of time. Suddenly rot3ex had them chant 3 names, Beta, Morbon, Fivah. For it to work all of them had to chant at the same time.
After a few minutes Beta had returned to kill Fivah. The fight was amazing, at the end Beta killed Fivah, but there was a prize to pay. The whole town of Morbon and all of it's citizens had died.

Sorry Fivah your name just sounds evil D:
I am only in 8th grade so it might not be the best.

The way you described Fivah at the end (not story) made me laugh.
Seriously.
Looks a bit short, though.

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