The first one is pretty good, I don't like the second one at all. You need to have more control of what you are doing, organize and plan it. Looks like you just went
"aha I need some more stuff ovah heah"
Ehh, make them 430x100 or 450x100. Also, add 1 or two pixel borders around them.
I wanna see what you can come up with.
Shin-Ryuu's BanGoat Hated by all. Yet still raped. Zanzy's Hoe Club!
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC] [GATA] [Inq] [doc]lover [GU] [BISH] [r]tard [Addicted]Allie [Doxa]Allie OKAY FUCK IT THIS SONG IS BAD - Ryuu
<Malvie> Zanzaba; only for you, baby. "Ehh, I'm sorry. I'm just being a dick."
Shin-Ryuu's BanGoat Hated by all. Yet still raped. Zanzy's Hoe Club!
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC] [GATA] [Inq] [doc]lover [GU] [BISH] [r]tard [Addicted]Allie [Doxa]Allie OKAY FUCK IT THIS SONG IS BAD - Ryuu
<Malvie> Zanzaba; only for you, baby. "Ehh, I'm sorry. I'm just being a dick."
Shin-Ryuu's BanGoat Hated by all. Yet still raped. Zanzy's Hoe Club!
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC] [GATA] [Inq] [doc]lover [GU] [BISH] [r]tard [Addicted]Allie [Doxa]Allie OKAY FUCK IT THIS SONG IS BAD - Ryuu
<Malvie> Zanzaba; only for you, baby. "Ehh, I'm sorry. I'm just being a dick."