I just want to know if i finally did a "good" replay.

Well, I'm not exactly a mastermind at cncing, but, I know how hard it is to get commented on when you're not too well known in this section of the forum so:
quite jerky with weird flow, seems too much hold is going on. The hit was quite nice and well balanced so thats coolio. nice posture and stuff, but, one other thing: uke basically fell over before you even touched him, so it seems a little cheap, but, still, it's a niceish replay. congrats.

All depends on your definition of a "good" replay to be honest, you could have landed the kick better, you could have jumped towards uke better, your opinion entirely though

Thanks Skylarrr and yes all replay,all, kick,hit can be better anything is perfect, when i say good,my definition of good isn't really important.Your definition of good is important because it's you the judge.