You used a set I haven't worn in 3 months. Lol.
Other than that, the keyframes were too jumpy. The speed was a bit too fast, and overall, some of the replays suck (Our bad).
Oh, and with the fist full of lighting replays, not sure why, but it replace Me with Uke and made it mess up. Forgot to fix that.
For free though, it's not bad at all. Keep at it, and I'm sure you'll be making incredible videos in no time.
EDIT: In the future, use free cam instead of default, It flows much better when watching a replay.