Masterexploder:
Cerberus' bane: The start was rather weird and there were moments where you just weren't doing anything. However once you got into it i was rather impressed. Some nice booms but it was a little stuttery i thought, i'd like to see some more fluidity.
Requiem: The start was again a little slow but i really liked the punch, you'e got soem real power in your hits. But then after the punch it seemed to lose flow with the decap, and the kick looked really last minute and despite the boom didn't look that powerful. Despite that, again the destruction was good. You hit your head at 1 or 2 points during it which isn't that attractive.
Stalking prey: Best one of the bunch imo, nice first punch despite contracting your elbow after the hit. Usually that affects the hit but it didnt much in this replay. Decap lacked power but meh, not to bothered, then the next hit was nice. Controlled, accurate. The flailing about looked like it needed more control, it was rather... weird. But the extra hit at the end was nice.
I'm not a recruiter but that's just my general thought, and after consulting oblivion, we cant get past the flow issues, it's a no im afraid if were deciding
But it looks like you're already in so i dont really know what's going on. There's my critique anyway.
Ninorossii
Cerberus attacks: I'm sorry but the replay is far to simple in general. Most joints are help at most points throughout the replay. it was a nice idea, starting behind uke like that, and i like jumps in replays but as i said, you need to relax a lot mroe joints, also try building up some power/speed before a hit, it makes booms much satisfying, and easy.
Cerberus attacks edit: Pretty much exactly the same comments as above, need to relax bro ;o
Finnished: The start of this replay was more appealing because it was more complex than the previous one. Then the decap could've been so much more, i made a boom in 2 tries, i'd like to see some more destruction in your replays aswell as some more relaxing.
Here'es the edit for you below, not that i'm a recruiter but i'd say no if i was. sorry mate.
Cerberus' bane: The start was rather weird and there were moments where you just weren't doing anything. However once you got into it i was rather impressed. Some nice booms but it was a little stuttery i thought, i'd like to see some more fluidity.
Requiem: The start was again a little slow but i really liked the punch, you'e got soem real power in your hits. But then after the punch it seemed to lose flow with the decap, and the kick looked really last minute and despite the boom didn't look that powerful. Despite that, again the destruction was good. You hit your head at 1 or 2 points during it which isn't that attractive.
Stalking prey: Best one of the bunch imo, nice first punch despite contracting your elbow after the hit. Usually that affects the hit but it didnt much in this replay. Decap lacked power but meh, not to bothered, then the next hit was nice. Controlled, accurate. The flailing about looked like it needed more control, it was rather... weird. But the extra hit at the end was nice.
I'm not a recruiter but that's just my general thought, and after consulting oblivion, we cant get past the flow issues, it's a no im afraid if were deciding
But it looks like you're already in so i dont really know what's going on. There's my critique anyway.
Ninorossii
Cerberus attacks: I'm sorry but the replay is far to simple in general. Most joints are help at most points throughout the replay. it was a nice idea, starting behind uke like that, and i like jumps in replays but as i said, you need to relax a lot mroe joints, also try building up some power/speed before a hit, it makes booms much satisfying, and easy.
Cerberus attacks edit: Pretty much exactly the same comments as above, need to relax bro ;o
Finnished: The start of this replay was more appealing because it was more complex than the previous one. Then the decap could've been so much more, i made a boom in 2 tries, i'd like to see some more destruction in your replays aswell as some more relaxing.
Here'es the edit for you below, not that i'm a recruiter but i'd say no if i was. sorry mate.
Last edited by Erth; Jan 7, 2012 at 11:10 PM.
She/They
Yeah, I only don't like erthtkv2 because of the mod's name. Make it "tkv2," and the mod will instantly become more popular. This is a valid reason as the name of the mod is still an important feature that no one seems to have yet discussed.
Yeah, I only don't like erthtkv2 because of the mod's name. Make it "tkv2," and the mod will instantly become more popular. This is a valid reason as the name of the mod is still an important feature that no one seems to have yet discussed.
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