This was actually a lot better than I was expecting.
Right, cnc:
So, at the start of your replays you tend to have quite ugly openers or you reuse the same ones, which in this case you reused one, Uke's opener was actually alright.
The jump launch was stiff and kinda boring, if you extended your knees and moved your legs more behind Uke when you hit Uke and then relax them you would've gotten a way better result.
I loved how you managed to get both Tori and Uke on their feet, that was pretty cool, no complaints there.
The flip Uke did was eeh but I'll leave it, but the punch he dodged was pretty cool too and it was awesome how you managed to turn it into a swipe kick which I have no problems with, but afterwards your elbow hit Uke's head which I didn't like.
The next attack you did was really cool although you should try put more power into that hit.
Your spins afterwards became very sloppy but I really liked Uke's movement during that time.
That last punch I wasn't a fan of, it wasn't aimed well.
I like that last pose, reminds me of Oblivion's self spar.
Keep working on it and you'll get there.