lolz like the title says its my first, please don't be too mean ( some meaness allowed) please rate and say how it could be improved

(oh and btw thats the first picture i ever drew on a computer lolz)

Uh, cant see shit!

there's no head..

omg epic dude i cant see it -.-

http://forums.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=35093