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hair needs borders,cartoonish shading the hair in the bottom just dont seem right, post updates soon 7/10

Oh this needs lots of shading and the hair looks weird. Is this WIP or not because it needs eyes and a mouth.

this is my first time i really never do cartoonish i just do plain things so can u explain what u mean by borders
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Oh no,this is real bad.The hair is wierd,it has those pixel-ish things at those edges of the hair.And I don't understand that thing,is it a mustache or a mouth?The hair should look like this:

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Please do not post your art in someone elses thread
~Lilmali97

is this supposed to be a remake of that boxxy head?

if so there's a few things that need fixed; Everything.

the hair is pixelated, make it smooth by using the pen tool.

the skin color is too dark, the color of skin in the head jibailanjiao posted would work perfectly.

the "patch" over her mouth... just redo it. it's shaded as if it were hair.

if this is not a boxxy head remake read below, if not, skip to the bottom.

Your head closely resembles the boxxy head, so my appologies for assuming it was. Having said that, everything I said above still stands true for the texture you're trying to create.

Sorry for a bit of harsh criticism, but if you make the corrections, you could have a real masterpiece on your hands.