So I made this head from scratch and I guess that it could be called my first attempt at a robotic head, at least without copying and pasting stuff on it, anyway i know its pretty simple in design and i wanted some C&C and how i could make it look better.



(the floop78 is a watermark)

I like it, but the straight lines under the mouth kinda look a bit weird. And I think you should add a bit of shading on the plates at the back, or maybe add some detail at the top.

Reminds me of Dead pool's mask.
Add more detail other than the all yellow and black and white. Also shade it better. 7/10. Keep editing it.

yah with the mouth i was going for kind of a grid mask sorta deal. do you guys think it looks better with a regular mouth? as for shading hows this?

Add more details, especially on the back. Some shading would be quite nice too. 7/10

I was going for simple and i know its empty on the top thats why i made this thread was for suggestions on what to do, that and so i can improve my texturing skills.

I like the mouth. Maybe you can make it a smile?

yah i can but i cant post them now i will this weekend though still trying to figure out what to do with the top.

well you should add some shading, and do u mind if i edit, but not sell?