(wc) The Writer's Club

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Lampito

Dec 19, 2015

Lampito

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Dec 19, 2015

(wc) The Writer's Club

Ladies and Gentlemen, Toribashians of all ages, I’m pleased to welcome you...

THE WRITER’S CLUB

The club welcomes all sorts of writers to share their work with the Toribash Community! The club/organization has no specific rules, just be nice. You are allowed to comment on another one’s writings, but please have some respect when doing so.

Purpose?
This club/organization was made to bring the great Toribash community together, present/discuss writings and to entertain other writers/non-writers

Founder
Lampito

Members
Sc1ence01

Application
While the organization is still young, applications wouldn’t be take as seriously.
Include some background info
Why do you want to join?
Include some of your work

* Please post your writing(s) in a spoiler

Last edited by Lampito; Dec 22, 2015 at 05:50 PM.

Lampito

Dec 21, 2015

Lampito

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Dec 21, 2015

Personally, I write poems, but I have a story for you as well

Tiffany's Sister

freeqs

The story is a bit dark...

A Loving Home

Once upon a time… on an abandoned village in Cam, Louisiana, there lived a family. This family loved the village and refused to move like the other families. In this family there was Papa Sheamus, Mama Rosie, Brother Odell and Sister Tia. They were the Lesh family.
One nice, cool evening, Odell and Tia Lesh went to the forest behind their house. Odell was 15 years old and he was a rebel. He was known for talking bad to his teachers, disobeying his parents and always stealing bread from the local baker. He always gave his parents a hard time.
Tia on the other hand was a very sweet kid. She was 10 years old and was a saint. She had outstanding grades and her parents loved her dearly.
Odell was very jealous of Tia and despised her, but would never show it. Tia would always get the attention and love from everyone, especially their parents. Odell and Tia continued playing a game they called, ´Lady Rapunzel´. Tia would pretend to be a trapped mistress in a castle and Odell had to come save her, before Mister Warren comes. Mister Warren was this evil creature that makes children do evil things. Papa Sheamus told this to warn Odell and Tia not to roam far from the house.
“Mister Warren is unseen by the naked eye and his home is in the mind of the weak,” explained Papa Sheamus. He informed Odell and Tia, that once they roam far from the house, they will begin to hear Mister Warren’s soothing voice.
“...His voice is as lovely as fresh baked bread, but falling for his requests will bring millions of years of guilt on your soul,” explained Papa . Odell never believed this bologna, but just agreed to make his father happy.
After a few games of ´Lady Rapunzel´, Odell became bored and started exploring around the house. Tia noticed that Odell was getting further away from the house and warned him to come back. Odell ignored her and continued walking forward, knowing that it wasn’t very far. Tia didn’t know what to do so she snatched her doll from the ground and ran towards Odell.
Tia began to worry and kept bothering Odell. Odell calmed Tia by bribing her with the biggest lollipop he had. Odell truly loved the outdoors, but was always distracted by his sister. Their parents would always give Tia the best clothes and the best treatment, usually Odell would deal with this, but today was different.
Odell was unusually upset today and felt a sudden rage inside of him. Tia sat on a fallen tree, playing with her doll, while Odell was seeing how far he could throw a rock in the water. Suddenly a strange voice began to speak inside Odell’s head. This voice was very soothing and talked to Odell like a mother talking to her new born baby.
This voice startled Odell, by repeating the commands, “Break Tia”. Odell thought he was going crazy, but couldn’t help to agree with this incredibly soothing voice. Odell felt this rage inside of him, a rage that he never thought he would acquire. The mysterious voice explained how Tia is better than him and loved more than him.
This train of thought was broken by Tia’s innocent voice, reminding Odell that she had to go the bathroom. The voice in Odell’s head faded away whispering the words, “Follow the path, the path of freedom”. Odell went to Tia and took her to a bush where she could go to the bathroom. Odell noticed a small path alongside the river. He grabbed Tia’s hand and started walking on the path.
This voice in Odell’s head became stronger and louder. Odell was becoming scared and frustrated. They stopped and Odell grabbed his head and started grunting. This worried Tia and she began to cry. Odell, confused, began shushing Tia and begged her to be quiet. Odell picked Tia up and continued walking on the path. Odell didn’t knew why he was taking this path, it was like he had no control of his body.
As the sun began to disappear, Papa Sheamus went outside to tell the kids to come in, then he realized he was gone. Papa knew, it was Mister Warren that made this happen. He knew that Tia was in big trouble. Papa grabbed his coat and went looking for them.
Tia was fast asleep and Odell was still walking on the path. Odell was in a rage with all the love and Tia got throughout her life. With this rage, the voice came back and informed Odell that danger was behind him. Odell began walking faster, with Tia in his arms.
After a while, Odell reached a small castle, he continued to obey the voice in his head and entered the castle. The castle was decorated with Tia’s favorite toys from home. Odell threw Tia on the floor and began to hit her. Tia’s screams pierced through the forest, reaching her worried father. This scream terrified Papa and he moved faster.
Tia ran away from Odell, but he caught up to her and jerked her back in the castle. Odell began to beat her and even choke her. Tia’s blood and tears ran down Odell’s pale hands. The choke was broken when Odell heard his Papa yell his name. Odell began to panic, he ran out of the castle, leaving Tia behind.
Papa Sheamus charged the castle door open and ran towards Tia, comforting her. He told Tia to wait for him when he comes back and told her to never leave the castle. He ran out of the house and went looking for Odell.
Odell was out of breath, Odell found a fallen trunk and hid behind it. He waited there holding a baseball like stick. Papa ran and ran. He called Odell’s name and that’s when Odell came. Odell slashed his Papa in the knee. Papa grunted in agony and grabbed the stick from Odell’s hand, when Odell went for the second hit. Papa Sheamus tackled Odell and pinned him to the ground by holding his neck. He looked at his dear son for the last time, knowing that he was too late. He grabbed a rock and began hitting Odell’s head with the rock. Odell’s eyes turned red and he let out a satanic chuckle. He gave one last strike, killing Odell.
Papa limped back to the house, but when Papa Sheamus reached there, the house was gone.

Sc1ence01

Dec 22, 2015

Sc1ence01

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Dec 22, 2015

Im Sc1ence01, im from the Philippines. I love Science, Math and Writing.

I want to join this because I love writing. I write stories, here are some of my works:

The Nitro story that I created a long time ago (warning: This is a very long story)

Nitro Story by Sc1ence01

Once upon a time, in the peaceful kingdom of SAPT, there were 3 brave and intelligent rulers. The kingdom was peaceful, and it was in its “Golden Age”. The kingdom has a No2nergy core at its center, it produces an energy supply for the kingdom and It also produces a valuable material called “Nitrolium”, this material is believed to be holy and it is only used by the Gods. There were only 3 Nitroliums left, without Nitroliums the kingdom would disintegrate. But one day, 2 of the leaders teamed up to steal the Nitroliums and use them for wrong ways.

A second after they took the Nitroliums there was an earthquake, the 2 leaders quickly run towards the exit of the kingdom, and the whole SAPT kingdom disintegrated and all people in that kingdom that time died. And the 2 leaders were never seen again. Everyone inside the kingdom died, but luckily Zack, one of the 3 leaders, was just travelling home from visiting a small village. But, after he finally travelled back to his kingdom, he was shocked that his kingdom is not there anymore and he only saw blue, red and black ashes. He mourned, he was very sad, he doesn’t know what to do next, he thought it was the end for him and he was about to suicide with his pocket knife. But suddenly he saw a spirit, it was the God of SAPT, and the God said to Zack “Go back to the village where you went and meet a farmer named Day” and Zack replied “Why does it need to be a farmer?!?” but then the God disappeared.

When he was about to travel to the village, his horse died because of starvation. He was forced to travel on foot. He walked for 3 days and 3 nights, only with a bottle of wine and a pocket knife. He reached a field, but he suddenly faint because on over-fatigue, hunger and dehydration. A man saw him and he brought the unconscious Zack to his simple Nipa Hut in his farm. After 3 hours Zack has finally woke up and beside him are Food and Water. The man went back to the hut and saw Zack already awake and said “How are you? My name is Day, I’m just a simple farmer” “Im fine, thanks for the food and water” and their conversation continued. Zack told Day about what happened, Day felt Zack’s hardships and said “I will join you and I will help you” and then Zack realized his mission, to recover the Nitroliums and to unite people.

They went to different places to find the 2 selfish leaders. Until they met a samurai named Daisho Judo Misha-iC. He was the best warrior in their place. He offered help in exchange for being their friend, which was accepted. The trio went to many places, in search for the 2 leaders. Until they reached an unknown land, a land that is not even on map, a land where the 2 leaders resided and built their own powerful army of Carbonitics with 10,000 soldiers. Even if it’s a 10,002 vs 3 match, the trio still charged and attacked, giving off their best in the bloody battle, until suddenly Zack’s pocket knife glowed, giving of a POWERUL ray of energy to the heavens! The God showed up and gave Zack, Day and DJMC the HOLY POWER OF THE NITRO HEAVEN.

Zack was given a Samurai Sword made with pure Nitrolium, Day was given super-intelligence that his IQ was over 9000 and DJMC was given a reflective shield also made from pure Nitrolium. Zack killed 3,333 enemies by decapitating enemies with his Nitrolium samurai sword, 6669 enemies left. Day killed 3,333 enemies by presenting mathematical equations which made enemies die from hemorrhage, 3336 enemies left. DJMC killed 3,333 enemies with his childhood katana and the shield which reflected any projectile, a poor soldier, and the 2 leaders were the only ones left. DJMC tortured the soldier, Zack decapitated the mastermind leader and Day taught advanced algebra, advanced physics and advanced calculus to the second leader, the second leader died from blood loss.

After the 2 leaders and the Carbonitic army lost, the unknown land, which was ugly and full of evil aura, changed into a paradise. Zack with Day and DJMC decided to make a kingdom named “Nitro” which came from the word “Nitrolium”. Peace was brought back and ANYONE with a good heart was welcomed.

The end.
By Sc1ence01

And here's the one I've created for (Bendaki)

Bendaki

Lastly, a poem to Mother Mary (religious)

Poem to Mother Mary (plz dont cry XD)

A Poem to Mother Mary
O’ Mother Mary you’re so lovely,
O’ Mother Mary you’re so sweet.
You shined lightness into my heart,
I love you, and we will never be apart.

You have a soft and lovely heart,
You really care for us.
Because of your mighty love
In you, I trust.

You have the most beautiful eyes,
Which unfroze the ones who are iced.
Our savior Jesus, was the one you raised,
Our savior Jesus, today we praise.

Because of your care,
We did good things everywhere.
The joy that you gave us,
Brought us peace from dusk to dawn, from dawn to dusk

You helped me pray to the Lord, Our God
You lead the way to his mighty rod.
We give you honor and respect to you,
Simply because, We Love You.

note: it seems the nitro story has some glitches idk

Last edited by Sc1ence01; Dec 22, 2015 at 12:40 PM.

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Lampito

Dec 22, 2015

Lampito

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Join Date: Mar 2015

Dec 22, 2015

Originally Posted by Sc1ence01

Im Sc1ence01, im from the Philippines. I love Science, Math and Writing.

I want to join this because I love writing. I write stories, here are some of my works:

The Nitro story that I created a long time ago (warning: This is a very long story)

Nitro Story by Sc1ence01

Once upon a time, in the peaceful kingdom of SAPT, there were 3 brave and intelligent rulers. The kingdom was peaceful, and it was in its “Golden Age”. The kingdom has a No2nergy core at its center, it produces an energy supply for the kingdom and It also produces a valuable material called “Nitrolium”, this material is believed to be holy and it is only used by the Gods. There were only 3 Nitroliums left, without Nitroliums the kingdom would disintegrate. But one day, 2 of the leaders teamed up to steal the Nitroliums and use them for wrong ways.

A second after they took the Nitroliums there was an earthquake, the 2 leaders quickly run towards the exit of the kingdom, and the whole SAPT kingdom disintegrated and all people in that kingdom that time died. And the 2 leaders were never seen again. Everyone inside the kingdom died, but luckily Zack, one of the 3 leaders, was just travelling home from visiting a small village. But, after he finally travelled back to his kingdom, he was shocked that his kingdom is not there anymore and he only saw blue, red and black ashes. He mourned, he was very sad, he doesn’t know what to do next, he thought it was the end for him and he was about to suicide with his pocket knife. But suddenly he saw a spirit, it was the God of SAPT, and the God said to Zack “Go back to the village where you went and meet a farmer named Day” and Zack replied “Why does it need to be a farmer?!?” but then the God disappeared.

When he was about to travel to the village, his horse died because of starvation. He was forced to travel on foot. He walked for 3 days and 3 nights, only with a bottle of wine and a pocket knife. He reached a field, but he suddenly faint because on over-fatigue, hunger and dehydration. A man saw him and he brought the unconscious Zack to his simple Nipa Hut in his farm. After 3 hours Zack has finally woke up and beside him are Food and Water. The man went back to the hut and saw Zack already awake and said “How are you? My name is Day, I’m just a simple farmer” “Im fine, thanks for the food and water” and their conversation continued. Zack told Day about what happened, Day felt Zack’s hardships and said “I will join you and I will help you” and then Zack realized his mission, to recover the Nitroliums and to unite people.

They went to different places to find the 2 selfish leaders. Until they met a samurai named Daisho Judo Misha-iC. He was the best warrior in their place. He offered help in exchange for being their friend, which was accepted. The trio went to many places, in search for the 2 leaders. Until they reached an unknown land, a land that is not even on map, a land where the 2 leaders resided and built their own powerful army of Carbonitics with 10,000 soldiers. Even if it’s a 10,002 vs 3 match, the trio still charged and attacked, giving off their best in the bloody battle, until suddenly Zack’s pocket knife glowed, giving of a POWERUL ray of energy to the heavens! The God showed up and gave Zack, Day and DJMC the HOLY POWER OF THE NITRO HEAVEN.

Zack was given a Samurai Sword made with pure Nitrolium, Day was given super-intelligence that his IQ was over 9000 and DJMC was given a reflective shield also made from pure Nitrolium. Zack killed 3,333 enemies by decapitating enemies with his Nitrolium samurai sword, 6669 enemies left. Day killed 3,333 enemies by presenting mathematical equations which made enemies die from hemorrhage, 3336 enemies left. DJMC killed 3,333 enemies with his childhood katana and the shield which reflected any projectile, a poor soldier, and the 2 leaders were the only ones left. DJMC tortured the soldier, Zack decapitated the mastermind leader and Day taught advanced algebra, advanced physics and advanced calculus to the second leader, the second leader died from blood loss.

After the 2 leaders and the Carbonitic army lost, the unknown land, which was ugly and full of evil aura, changed into a paradise. Zack with Day and DJMC decided to make a kingdom named “Nitro” which came from the word “Nitrolium”. Peace was brought back and ANYONE with a good heart was welcomed.
The end.
By Sc1ence01

And here's the one I've created for (Bendaki)
Bendaki

There was a God named Bendai and he has a wife named Shaki. They had a son named Shakadai Tenno which came down from heaven to visit the Earth. Shakadai married a human, they had a son named Benshakai.

Benshakai was born to be a leader and a warrior, he received the Mandate of Gods. During his time there is a war between 3 strong kingdoms: Benshi, Dai-i-ishi and Shalki. Benshakai is the emperor of Benshi, because of his strength and leadership he conquered the other kingdoms in just 3 years.

Benshakai was then the emperor of the 3 kingdoms. He put an end to discrimination and racism in his kingdom and he promoted respect. He also forgave the ones who hurt them in the past. Also, he was very loyal to his one and only wife.

He gave his kingdom a new name, he named it “Bendaki”. From that day forward BENDAKI stood strong, conquering the challenges in the past, present and future. Benshakai’s leadership was passed from generation to generation forming new leaders which guide them to victory.

-End-

Lastly, a poem to Mother Mary (religious)

Poem to Mother Mary (plz dont cry XD)

A Poem to Mother Mary
O’ Mother Mary you’re so lovely,
O’ Mother Mary you’re so sweet.
You shined lightness into my heart,
I love you, and we will never be apart.

You have a soft and lovely heart,
You really care for us.
Because of your mighty love
In you, I trust.

You have the most beautiful eyes,
Which unfroze the ones who are iced.
Our savior Jesus, was the one you raised,
Our savior Jesus, today we praise.

Because of your care,
We did good things everywhere.
The joy that you gave us,
Brought us peace from dusk to dawn, from dawn to dusk

You helped me pray to the Lord, Our God
You lead the way to his mighty rod.
We give you honor and respect to you,
Simply because, We Love You.

note: it seems the nitro story has some glitches idk

Well written stories and I loved the poem!

Welcome!

What are your thoughts on prose poems? The type of poems that really have no such rules. (E.E Cummings was a really good prose poet).

All the poems I've posted here are prose poems, tell me what you think.

Home Sweet Home

Last edited by Lampito; Dec 22, 2015 at 06:20 PM.

Sc1ence01

Dec 23, 2015

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your poems are good, its imaginative and simply cool. Seems your poems are made with TLC lol. Anyway prose poems are awesome, for me all types of poems are awesome.

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Lampito

Dec 23, 2015

Lampito

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Dec 23, 2015

Originally Posted by Sc1ence01

your poems are good, its imaginative and simply cool. Seems your poems are made with TLC lol. Anyway prose poems are awesome, for me all types of poems are awesome.

I try making em funny, but it always turns out dark. Did you get paid writing the stories for the clans?

Sc1ence01

Dec 23, 2015

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Dec 23, 2015

welp (bad) didn't accept my story "the story was good but I think its not the story that we're finding' -UberAZN

D:

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Lampito

Dec 23, 2015

Lampito

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Dec 23, 2015

This one is a fine line between stupid and meaningful

Sc1ence01

Dec 24, 2015

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Dec 24, 2015

Its seems ok mate, nice job

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halen

Dec 26, 2015

halen

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Dec 26, 2015

Afraid of new ideas and hopes
These challenges I hadn't coped
Innocent lives taken away by my presence
Dead bodies near me, bring a nice essence
Let's sit together and cry for one another
As I kill every other

eh...

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