Hmm, kind if a strange replay.
The opener seemed like it had a lot of possibilities, but then you extended your knee on your contracted hip, which threw you upside down.
From there it looked like you lost a lot of your flow.

I think you could edit this replay and get a cleaner outcome.
You can do better
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Whao man: That replay was sick...
Loved the basic opener, spin was great, as was the kick and you transitioned into your pose very fluently
8.5/10

Thanks, Lucy. :3 I agree with you, but, whenever i try to edit a replay i already made and saved, i can never make it better Dx
as for the spin, yeah, it was hard to get that boom but it was so worth it imo. and the pose was easy, which is rare.

Here's a low grav stiff-ish replay. i hope you guys like it. ( Title is lyrics from: http://youtu.be/s5z6Ir9nDU8 )

Ezo! njdfdffjjfidifdifi

okay so this replay was very stylish the opener was pretty sick but what i didn't like is that it was way to close specifically i saw the body part touch your shoulder before you grabbed other than that i like the extra decaps and pose.

Hopefully that's enough CnC for that one.

Thanks, James! Yeah, there was nothing i could really do about the closeness that wouldn't ruin the entire replay. :c

here's a fail

okay time for an actual replay.
not my best but i had to post this one because of the pose. lol
( title: http://youtube.com/watch?v=JEW5gMqhid0 )