YouTubing it. Well anyway, I'll redo all the filming when my PC's gotten a real nights sleep, it has been on since friday nonstop. My internet has also not been kind today, I have not been able to download shit. Means no replays to film. I sorted it out now though, but tomorrow I have an important test and yeah. Sorry. If you have any objections, go ahead and make the movie yourselves. I'm going to start a little on the clan story as that does not demand alot from the PC. This might have sounded bitter and so on, but what I said was in the most sincere way. So, about the clan story, do you want it to be an "epic fantasyish" kind of thing or a "badass" kind of thing? Any suggestions welcome, ~Dalir
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Sorry for doublepost, but this is a raw sketch of how the clan story might look. I could write with a total different story, a totally different theme, basically in anyway you want, as long as I get some feedback. Read through it, think about what we outlasted and then comment. Thanks~
Life is good, you know. When I walk through the streets of this abandoned city, I cannot help but think how much tidier this place would look with 'life' inhabiting it. Like it once did. A war played out here, I sense it. I do not possess supernatural powers, but there is a very vague feeling in the air in the lost city of Toribash.
I could see it right before me, Toris and Ukes fighting, ripping eachother apart for no apparent reason at all. The Toris had ultimately evolved into monstruous murderers thirsting for blood, while the Uke would peacefully recieve.
The Toris continued for a very long time to kill every Uke they would see in the massive city of Toribash, a large city of unknown origin evolved on the planet of earth, slightly 3000 years after christ. Where the peace went nobody knows, why the Toris wanted blood nobody knows. There were some Toris who were more efficient killers than others, and they would eventually find eachother to achieve agendas only known to them. Clans, if you may. The clans would have various names, various looks and colours, various personalitites. During the outbreak of said war, there were but one clan who outlasted the others, survived, and moved away from the city of Toribash. This clan had been named after a technique filled with power, precision and an agile mind.
Their name was Kick, formed and reformed after their old leader had parted with different goals in mind. The self proclaimed but trusted leader, Samule, had taught the people their powerful but careful tactics.
He later on named a Tori who excelled at fighting but also laying down tactics for survival, second leader of the clan. He adhered to the name of Ekke. They both gave some of the clans eldest secrets to trusted members of the clan, so called 'Elites'. The elites had the power to nominate Toris who showed interest for Kick's agenda, and wanted to share their mind with the clans people.
The soldiers of Kick came and went, some stayed, some left due to wanting different things from their clan. The soldiers will always be strong, the soldiers will always be there.
Even though this said clan named Kick has outlasted many terrors, many betrayals, a war and the aftermath, they will be one of the few (if not only) clans to survive and keep their agenda alive.
Life is good, you know. When I walk through the streets of this abandoned city, I cannot help but think how much tidier this place would look with 'life' inhabiting it. Like it once did. A war played out here, I sense it. I do not possess supernatural powers, but there is a very vague feeling in the air in the lost city of Toribash.
I could see it right before me, Toris and Ukes fighting, ripping eachother apart for no apparent reason at all. The Toris had ultimately evolved into monstruous murderers thirsting for blood, while the Uke would peacefully recieve.
The Toris continued for a very long time to kill every Uke they would see in the massive city of Toribash, a large city of unknown origin evolved on the planet of earth, slightly 3000 years after christ. Where the peace went nobody knows, why the Toris wanted blood nobody knows. There were some Toris who were more efficient killers than others, and they would eventually find eachother to achieve agendas only known to them. Clans, if you may. The clans would have various names, various looks and colours, various personalitites. During the outbreak of said war, there were but one clan who outlasted the others, survived, and moved away from the city of Toribash. This clan had been named after a technique filled with power, precision and an agile mind.
Their name was Kick, formed and reformed after their old leader had parted with different goals in mind. The self proclaimed but trusted leader, Samule, had taught the people their powerful but careful tactics.
He later on named a Tori who excelled at fighting but also laying down tactics for survival, second leader of the clan. He adhered to the name of Ekke. They both gave some of the clans eldest secrets to trusted members of the clan, so called 'Elites'. The elites had the power to nominate Toris who showed interest for Kick's agenda, and wanted to share their mind with the clans people.
The soldiers of Kick came and went, some stayed, some left due to wanting different things from their clan. The soldiers will always be strong, the soldiers will always be there.
Even though this said clan named Kick has outlasted many terrors, many betrayals, a war and the aftermath, they will be one of the few (if not only) clans to survive and keep their agenda alive.
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Originally Posted by Dalir
Sorry for doublepost, but this is a raw sketch of how the clan story might look. I could write with a total different story, a totally different theme, basically in anyway you want, as long as I get some feedback. Read through it, think about what we outlasted and then comment. Thanks~
Life is good, you know. When I walk through the streets of this abandoned city, I cannot help but think how much tidier this place would look with 'life' inhabiting it. Like it once did. A war played out here, I sense it. I do not possess supernatural powers, but there is a very vague feeling in the air in the lost city of Toribash.
I could see it right before me, Toris and Ukes fighting, ripping eachother apart for no apparent reason at all. The Toris had ultimately evolved into monstruous murderers thirsting for blood, while the Uke would peacefully recieve.
The Toris continued for a very long time to kill every Uke they would see in the massive city of Toribash, a large city of unknown origin evolved on the planet of earth, slightly 3000 years after christ. Where the peace went nobody knows, why the Toris wanted blood nobody knows. There were some Toris who were more efficient killers than others, and they would eventually find eachother to achieve agendas only known to them. Clans, if you may. The clans would have various names, various looks and colours, various personalitites. During the outbreak of said war, there were but one clan who outlasted the others, survived, and moved away from the city of Toribash. This clan had been named after a technique filled with power, precision and an agile mind.
Their name was Kick, formed and reformed after their old leader had failed them. The self proclaimed but trusted leader, Samule, had taught the people their powerful but careful tactics.
He later on named a Tori who excelled at fighting but also laying down tactics for survival, second leader of the clan. He adhered to the name of Ekke. They both gave some of the clans eldest secrets to trusted members of the clan, so called 'Elites'. The elites had the power to nominate Toris who showed interest for Kick's agenda, and wanted to share their mind with the clans people.
Even though this said clan named Kick has outlasted many terrors, many betrayals, a war and the aftermath, they will be one of the few (if not only) clans to survive and keep their agenda alive.
I agree with Func, but story rocks. HARD.
<PlayerID666> samule is the coolest guy around
