its always heartbreaking to see people neglecting to comment or encourage newer replaymakers, but unfortunately when we all start out we aren't able to make replays with enough substance for an entire post to comment on. what i can say is that the 1738 replay shows you're on the right track to getting better. you seem to have at least a basic understanding of balance, which is good. its one of the more important things to know when making heavier gravity type replays. keep forcing yourself to do better and better things and youll be a top tier replay guy in no time.