Try this

still doesn't work :/

true

EH let's change replay then

Guess whos's back? Back again? Shadys Back! just kidding sds is back!

new replay

I don't remember seeing you here before... maybe a hint so I could remember you?

I was in this org awhile after you made it. try to find my app it'll show you

MrJingles let me in

You weren't on very much when i joined

2 hours lel:

opener was generic, I think it would be better if you used a different engaged distance

I love the crotch kick, but after the kick you were very stiff

the slap could be better, but it was nice

wrist dm was unnecessary

same for the elbow dm

kick to get the split and decap was nice

shoulder dm was meh, could be better

cool last hit

gj

Carriage:

opener was very stiff, try to relax some joints, and to be truthful it looked like something a noob would do

the kick to the crotch was weird and stiff.

If you're doing a manip, you wouldn't want to let uke touch the ground

jump didn't look very good

I didn't like the random tap to the head

pec dm looked very weird and stiff. Try to make it look more powerful aswell

I don't like the decap. It was weird, weak, and you used grab for it

head butt was weird, try using a different method to do the split

work on your movements and stuff

Also what happened to the CnC the replay above thing?

sdsman didn't CnC

I was just destroying stuff just kicking around and made a nice replay out of it.

Also, new one down there.
Was kind of stiff a bit in 400->360 but eh, ended up pretty well though.

Sds: I'm convinced.


RayWill:
Multi-tasking:
Cool opener, but then I didn't understand shit after that.
something flew ._.
Ok so, split was generic from what I've seen from good people before
Knees Dismemberments ruined the flow a bit but still they got you balanced, good job on that
Then I saw that Skeet was a nice double dismemberment one
Nice replay overall, went a bit of turnabout and stuff when going for dismemberments but you've done it well
You're getting better ey

Jeez:

hold that neck m8

opener was nice and fluid

double core was awesome

other boom was sexy af

gj