Well, I dk how much you did manage to copy my style ( also thank ;p), but don't ever move uke in a replay. It's frowned upon and makes the replay like a "cheat" replay.
I liked the opener, it does have some potential and you had a nice jump idea. But during the air try to speed up your movement and do the decap faster instead of floating around like that. Also try to practice your balance to land realistically ( on both feet preferably) if you do -30 gravity. After the decap, your movement became a bit random so try to avoid that as well.