Originally Posted by Archlurps

The collab was great, I really liked how Uke's knees get just sweeped off. Your other replays aren't half bad either. You move a bit stiffly at times, especially with your openers. Especially if you're playing on high gravity settings, it's not only more stylish but more effective to prep your first move from a lower position so you have more range of motion to work with until you hit Uke. You also often retract your strikes right after the DM. It's difficult to avoid sometimes, especially if you need to keep an eye on your body position, but try to let your limbs follow through after strikes, it looks more natural and gives an impression of power to your moves. It also usually presents more anatomically viable followup possibilities. Here's a little something I edited from your replay "Taste of the Glory" in your first post to showcase the fact.

Originally Posted by Archlurps

it's a bit slow to pick up, and the split DM looks a bit underpowered. It does leave Uke's torso floating slowly for easy manipulation and the rest of the combo with good-looking DM's and nice flow. You end it a bit abruptly as well.