Toribash
Originally Posted by Static View Post
im not big on cnc but this replay is cool so yeah ill do my best. and by best i mean all i got is a general overview.

ok so opener pretty standard flip thing is nice, but kinda jerky. liked the lift and follow up that was pretty cool, but when you decapped i was kinda sad cause it looked like you set up for a sick manip and the decap was also really weak. the follow-up combo was pretty sweet. i liked the skeets too especially the bounce one.

ok so overall work on making your movements smooth. Also try something new other than standard opener dms or opener manip dms. mix it up a bit.

idk if this was any good considering im hella washed up but ye.

Originally Posted by Dobby View Post
aaaaaa i meant to do this earlier in the day.

The opener is hella cool, i really dig it, as Static said the decap felt really weak, compared to the manip.

Work on smoothing out the replay, mainly transitioning from one DM to another, other than that it's not bad

I'm so fucking flattered like holy shit.
Static. Thanks homie <3...
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[UB] Degenerated Demons.rpl (104.6 KB, 15 views)
ok so opener is cool (them knees though). around frame 425 your left arm extends pretty fast and looks jerky. And during the spin your knee contracts way too fast and kinda breaks the flow.

other than that looks pretty good. Might be hard to follow up though unless you grab or something idk thats up to you to figure out.






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2nd Version of Degenerated Demons.
I don't know which is better so tell me which one you guys would like me to continue with.












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[UB] Degenerated Demons 2.rpl (99.0 KB, 11 views)
imo you should continue the second one, maybe even starting with a manip or something, very noice flow
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[UB] Decreased Conginuity.rpl (344.2 KB, 18 views)
cool opener, was nice and slick

manip was good for the most part I guess, not much to say about it

skeet didn't look to good imo, also we barely get to see the thing actually hit. I would suggest extending the match frames by about 20-50 so people can see what you did.


overall I liked it. Strong manip, well placed hits, and a good overall flow.

gj
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