Toribash
Good SelfSpar.
The Tori and Ukes movement is very imbalance to me, way too focus on Tori Part.
But i still like the choreography between the two. Good Job

8.7/10 ( I'm so lazy )
Thanks ET ill definitely put that advice to good use

Edit: added a bad tricking replay
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[Tricking] Vroomvroom.rpl (258.9 KB, 6 views)
Last edited by Stance; Oct 1, 2018 at 04:04 PM. Reason: added bad tricking
Stance#6077
[Tricking]Vroomvroom:
On the first trick, you jumped from your toes, its better to jump with your foot flat on the ground. You keep contracting and extending your legs mid-flip, which doesn't look good. You landed leaning to one side, that makes it harder to continue. You should of continued the spin until you were upright. On the next trick you twisted to the left, that ruins the flow. You should of spun to the right. I don't really know what you did after that, but it doesn't really fit. You just relaxed all. The scoot you did wasn't the best. Your attempted cork didn't look that good either because you barely had height, and the position in the air wasn't very good. Try watching other trickers to see the position they use as they cork. I edited your replay a bit to show what you could have done with your setup.

I'm not really a good tricker either though, but hopefully I helped a bit. Sorry for the long paragraph
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For Stance.rpl (212.0 KB, 4 views)
Last edited by Instep; Oct 3, 2018 at 04:05 AM.
"It doesn't have to be perfect to be wonderful"
My replay thread
Thanks Instep! this was my first attempt at a chain of tricks so i wasn't sure how to make everything flow I usually just do one trick then end the replay like a cork or a backflip, back full etc I also rushed a lot but that is no excuse.
Stance#6077
Warup im here too

I Love Traps <3

Hey stance im glad u have a replay thread the replays are good at least for me
Last edited by Hyndu; Oct 7, 2018 at 03:24 AM. Reason: i dindt like my comment
Some more tricking CnC if you want

Also hehe thanks hyndu
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Another Bump Replay
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[Tricking] I dont know tbh.rpl (215.9 KB, 1 views)
Last edited by Stance; Oct 8, 2018 at 01:13 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Stance#6077
Originally Posted by Stance View Post
I was gonna try to make this a manip then i realized i cant manip

That is pretty sick you can tell youre picking it up a lot more. The only things that stood out most to me were the second hit maybe could've had more BOOM, and after that hit the fall down looks a little stiff like you force. Pretty good bro keep it up!