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Hyrozen's Replay Thread
The Runner
What do you think ?
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#Hyrozen#P - Just Run.rpl (1.40 MB, 44 views)
jisse_just_run.tbm (16.7 KB, 27 views)
Last edited by Hyrozen; Aug 25, 2016 at 12:32 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
first vault:
-was a toe jump, something that imo is gross in pk
-the little step off thing you did on that vault looked kinda nice though

second vault:
-again a toe jump
-it looked awkward because you were getting to close to the vault and had to cut your step off half way

the first roll
-the roll did what its supposed to do, witch is keep your momentum although it could have been better imo
-it was a little but jolty when you jammed your hand into the ground to get the momentum you needed for the jump, this could have been avoided if you had a better roll

the jump fallowing the roll
-your movement in the jump was pretty good, not much else to say

the slide
-the slide was meh, the movement wasn't great
-the transition off the slide was good

the stairs
-you did a good job of keeping momentum on the stairs but both jumps were toe jumps :'c
-the run at the top of the stairs looked very unnatural

the gap
-you missed out on a good opportunity to wall run there, witch would have looked much nicer than what u ended up doing.
-other than that the gap looked pretty messy

the next gap
-your kong was pretty gross
-you did a good job of keeping momentum again
-the landing on the other side was gross and messy

the bars
- you did alright on the bars but at the start of the bars you did some really weird natural flip things that were pretty gross
-the landing on the other platform was pretty good although you did loose pretty much all your momentum

the tiktaks
-the run leading up to the tiktaks was not great
-the jump off the first tiktak was pretty good and gave a fair bit of power
-your vault onto the platform with cylinders was pretty good aside from that fact that it was a toe jump

the cylinders
-your run on the cylinders was pretty messy although it got cleaner as you went

the ending
-imo was a bit more flashy than it needed to be but over was pretty good, corks weren't great.

over all a score of 6.7/10

i hope to see some new stuff in future as your replay showed promise, just keep playing and keep improving.
Okay, Thanks I will train with your board
My best Tricking of the week
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#Hyrozen#T - Knight.rpl (264.9 KB, 35 views)
Last edited by Hyrozen; Aug 30, 2016 at 01:24 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Good replay
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#Hyrozen#T - Aerial.rpl (233.7 KB, 32 views)
Last edited by Glimpsed; Sep 21, 2016 at 07:07 PM. Reason: Removed MP replay
The run was pretty good, just some twitches here and there
the setup was quite nice, there could be some improvements
but that aerial was pretty stiff though
I dont even Signature okay
It is a good parkour ?
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#Hyrozen#P - TeamRunner.rpl (791.5 KB, 24 views)
joon_teamrunner_pk.tbm (13.1 KB, 18 views)
Last edited by Hyrozen; Oct 2, 2016 at 07:51 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
-run at the start was pretty good
-the recovery from the landing from the slide was good
-the front flip over the vault was boring and slow but you couldn't really do that much better
with the space you had, if you had landed the slide better
-the second slide (on your feet) was also good, kinda impressive in mp
-the vault after the second slide, was good and flowed nicely into the roll

overall 7.3/10
Originally Posted by Hyrozen View Post
The Runner
What do you think ?

i liked every thing it was smooth and amazing
but there was a 360 spin that was weird a bit
but still cool for me anyway i started to parkour
in singleplayer too make sure to check some of my
parkour replays
for some reason i cant see the teamrunner mod
cuz of that i couldn't see the parkour replay
but its seems cool doe
nice work <3