Toribash
Original Post
sprys replays
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rate the newer ones
Attached Files
!!!spry crows_nest.rpl (93.9 KB, 44 views)
!!!spry altar.rpl (132.2 KB, 32 views)
!!!spry over_pass.rpl (102.0 KB, 30 views)
!!!spry trainstation.rpl (88.8 KB, 26 views)
Last edited by sprytryne; Oct 3, 2009 at 09:21 AM.
9/10 Why?

Because I didn't like the ending of the 4th replay but other than that they are cool
!!!spry crows_nest.rpl (93.9 KB, 10 views) symetrycal beginin and stiffness. you can do it better

!!!spry altar.rpl (132.2 KB, 8 views) much better. get a balance or pose in the end and it i'll give it 10/10

!!!spry trainstation.rpl (88.8 KB, 6 views) hahaha lol. i love it

!!!spry over_pass.rpl (102.0 KB, 8 views) not bad but also not great



2nd pack

spry--breakdanceshiz.rpl (118.4 KB, 3 views) nice. very nice. 8.5/10 relax more

spry--l ripping..rpl (90.7 KB, 2 views) cant tell you what is wrong. maybe it is ok

Spry--drunkwork.rpl (87.8 KB, 2 views) symetrical(i dunno how this word should be written xD) beiginnig is bad. balance is goodgood work

spry--punchpunch.rpl (115.1 KB, 2 views) it is a good replay but try to find balance faster



sooo your replays are good. try to make a non grab smth;)