It's nice for your first video, but as Pirate said; take out the rolling text, and don't make it "documentary-ish" if you know what I mean. Don't explain everything you do "multiplayer replays, single player replays" , just and intro, and credits
that's about it :]
EDIT: and try to not show the same replays more than twice
Last edited by DarkEnergy; Apr 20, 2008 at 03:09 AM.