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Astral Replay Thread
Hey everyone.
Cncs are welcomed.
I'm open at every type of comments but be polite and respectful.
Thanks.
Cncs are welcomed.
I'm open at every type of comments but be polite and respectful.
Thanks.
Last edited by Astral; Dec 25, 2014 at 03:28 PM.
Elle couuurt, Elle coooourt! LA MAAAAaaaAaladiiiie d'amOOoour! Dans le c... (cœur) des enfaaants! De 16 à 77 ans!
You where a bit twitchy from time to time.
Manipulation could be better.
That kick to the face was unnecessary... Wait.. It kinda looks necessary.
The transition to the pose was not that great.
Overall 8/10
Great job and work hard.
Manipulation could be better.
That kick to the face was unnecessary... Wait.. It kinda looks necessary.
The transition to the pose was not that great.
Overall 8/10
Great job and work hard.
♥ suiseggs ♥
That's true I was not sure about the transition too.
Last edited by Astral; Aug 15, 2014 at 01:25 AM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Elle couuurt, Elle coooourt! LA MAAAAaaaAaladiiiie d'amOOoour! Dans le c... (cœur) des enfaaants! De 16 à 77 ans!
I wasn't a huge fan of the manipulation one. The opener wasn't very clean, and pretty generic, but it got better later.
I liked the second one, although I think you should add more to the replay. It was pretty fluid, and in -30 gravity, which I really like. It would have been cool if you could get a nice kick in there to boom the torso, and maybe destroy the bottom too, but that's tough. The pose was well done, although you did have to adjust a bit. Keep it up!
I liked the second one, although I think you should add more to the replay. It was pretty fluid, and in -30 gravity, which I really like. It would have been cool if you could get a nice kick in there to boom the torso, and maybe destroy the bottom too, but that's tough. The pose was well done, although you did have to adjust a bit. Keep it up!