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Smiley's replays, back from the dead
I was tired of failing at singleplayer, started practicing, and now hope I don't fail as much. Here's some replays, feel free to give any criticism you can think of, harsher the better. It's good to know how to improve.
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MMdrunkenbackhand.rpl (142.5 KB, 54 views)
MMtopdown.rpl (199.8 KB, 28 views)
MMyouforgotthis.rpl (143.3 KB, 44 views)
MMgrindingstumps.rpl (193.5 KB, 39 views)
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Lol thanks, here's another I threw together. I'd like to get it to a full madman but need more practice moving fluidly across the ground.
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S-elbowlunge.rpl (123.1 KB, 20 views)
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they look kinda awkward when ur back is in the air.and there arent any much noticeable hits, like booms.other wise theyre good.7.5/10
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Alright, in this one I tried to work on putting more power into my kicks and skeet. Suggestions are always appreciated.
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MMweneedmorepowah.rpl (153.3 KB, 31 views)
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Your skeets, sir, are epic.
You may wanna try being more relaxed with your openers, and I recomend you to try a skeet dm.
And maybe you can teach me how to do skeets >:|
you seem you're willing to try new things, so here's a few suggestions:

try being more relaxed

try to makes your movements "flow". in your first replay you sort of pulled uke in to kick, pushed him back out, pulled in and kicked again. this makes the replay sort of awkward.


however, I do love your skeets, keep it up ;)
In this one I tried using relax all a bunch more, and I think the first three kicks have a bit of a flow thing happening. Thanks for the protips, I'm going to keep working on getting this.
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MMkillercorkscrew.rpl (152.0 KB, 22 views)
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Here's another one, I'm trying to use as much relax as I can and still make powerful hits. There was a different ending for this but it kinda sucked so I redid it.
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MMgivemeyourheart.rpl (119.1 KB, 19 views)
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Here's a couple of short spar-type-things. Today's the first day I've tried something like this.
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SPalleyspar2.rpl (173.7 KB, 15 views)
SPswordspar1.rpl (271.8 KB, 13 views)
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