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Ruadhan's big bag of replay booty.
I'm going to post any replays I make, that I think are good enough here so I can hear peoples opinions on them and get critique.
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Ruadhan - er.rpl (120.4 KB, 14 views)
ruadhan - flow kick 1.rpl (96.6 KB, 12 views)
Ruadhan - yehhhh 7(2).rpl (101.2 KB, 10 views)
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Replay bump, Cnc please.
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Ruadhan - Decap 3.rpl (68.8 KB, 15 views)
Ruadhan - tidal.rpl (74.4 KB, 13 views)
Last edited by Ruadhan; Mar 28, 2014 at 10:50 PM.
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Firstly, start further away from Uke pls

Secondly, think through your moves instead of just flailing forward and trying to get hits (Your last two replays were slightly better)

Thirdly, relax joints you aren't using and try to twitch less
I do some videos
Feel free to PM me for any video-related questions
Thanks for the critique. I got the same kind of advice from someone and else and thus, came up with this. The opener is a bit odd but other than that I think I may have improved.
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Ruadhan - Legs.rpl (74.4 KB, 14 views)
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That was good, you are improving

Maybe go for more booms
I do some videos
Feel free to PM me for any video-related questions
Turned "flow kick 1" into a madman.
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Ruadhan - Chocolate cheese.rpl (205.4 KB, 11 views)
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New replay up in here.
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Ruadhan - lightning.rpl (52.1 KB, 9 views)
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Replay bump. CnC please.
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Ruadhan - tri.rpl (87.9 KB, 13 views)
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Chocolate Cheese
Not bad, but You should have done a little more with Uke's torso. I like the flow of the whole kick, but the transition cartwheel to the pose was a bit stiff. 7.5/10

Lightning
The idea was cool, but not the best execution. The kick was meh, it could have been stronger, and the pose was the worst part, it was unmanaged, (fell down after there was plenty of time left in the frames) And stiff. 7/10

Tri
It looked a bit wierd, but it was because of the gravity. The kick was very weak, and it looks like the only reason it dmed was because of the gravity setting. I like the transition to the pose, but the bob with your feet at the end kinda messed it up. 7.5/10

Overall your pretty good. Keep practicing.
Thanks RedFox, I wasn't really bothered with a proper ending pose to be honest because I was already busy with work and the bob with my feet is there for personal preference.
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