Toribash
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[Set] Fourth Set|Void/Imperial
Here is my fourth set.


I put it on auction a couple days ago and I'm wondering why it's not so popular. Comment and rate if you want. Criticize down to the smallest details. I want to see what's wrong with the set.

The auction is still on by the way. (I hate the current winning bid. I worked my ass off on this set.)

http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=108646


Current things needed to be changed:
1. More details to head.
2. Raise Eyes
3. Change hands


Last edited by CaptainLOL; Jul 20, 2009 at 01:25 PM.
Bored of this....
Want to join GATA?
Real nice 9/10

Could you add more details to the head, though?
RIP ∑
master of the universe
Reminds me alot of KiTFoX' set. ;o

Its nice and all, but the parts are very sharp, try smoothing them, and add shading, also the hands dont fit at all :o

Nice set though
Okay thanks. .

And it might look similar but if you look at them side by side you would totally change your mind.
Bored of this....
Want to join GATA?
random shapes + colour scheme. reminds me of kitfox. do not want more reminders about kitfox.
edit: gah, nobuddie noticed it first...

cant really see the head, so i cant crit, what i can see is... average.
random gradient on the hands? hands generally look incomplete and dont follow the rest of the set

keep to the default shader when previewing, that shader enhances colour, not quite a true representation of the set...

random shapes only take you so far
-=Art is never finished, only abandoned=-
ya, but try not to overdo it...
and your random shapes should sometimes show a theme of sorts... an abstraction of form, rather than random
-=Art is never finished, only abandoned=-