how about explaining how I should've done the text?
I'm no pro, so I hope you can understand where things like this would help me.

without that your comment is just criticism, and not constructive criticism.

I think the usual thing to do is use a small white font in the bottem corner to write the title, then sign your name in white (not using text, just signing with pen or w/e)

I was constructive, I told you what was done poorly in the art. It's your job as the creator to find a way to fix that. Personally, I would use no flashy font, and wouldn't even title it. At most I might put my name in very small font in the corner. I didn't give you an easy way to fix it because the only fix is what I've said. It shouldn't be there.

btw, when you re-render it can you increase the 'volume' of the volumetric lighting?

I think it will make it cooler =P


EDIT:
[QUOTE+BenDover]centre focus is normal
off centre focus is "artistic"[/QUOTE]
^ Relevant to ur picture i think.
Make the image widescreen =)

Stonewall: ah ok, I misread your previous post, sorry.

I really didn't see what would make a good addition, but I wanted to add something, it looked empty without something else there.

Gorman: if I do re-render, I'll keep that in mind, thanks.