I don't mind the borrow :P also, I like the red bcs as u said, it's like BOOM red. which makes the eyes stand out, green is kind of good aswell, but idk. Fenris is who has the last word :P

and i'll change it more to get the really, really mad eyes expression

Update:

please tell me you intend to fix the gap in the teeth.
otherwise, shading and detailing is looking excellent, lacking a bit of depth still
by far your best sofar though

yes I do :P

and yea some places have bad value >.> i'll try to fix that